Young gun

Strongly reminds me of how really talented people don't get their fair chance in life. Nice message in that poem.

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Strong idea there but,as I told you before, please start expanding and put some conviction into this. darko.demark666 did most of the explanation which i guess wrapped up your whole ...

I understand that.If you experiment a little more with the idea, the poem will expand.Getting a clear idea is very important which in your case has happened very well, leading ...

Thanks for your reviews people.This poem might not have come out well because it was my first attempt at non-rhyming poetry.And about that last line...i guess i added it unnecessarily.

Great work there.You brought out the emotions very well. The poem has a great effect. Keep up the good work!

Hey...amazing poem that diverts towards the end reminds me of a similar poem on this site some writer wrote about a basketball. Really humorous!

Amazing construction of sentences.I loved the way the poem unfolds. Great portrayal of the liar's ability and how his habit devoured him. A little long,but overall.....excellent work!